An Inconsiderate Act By Zoe Moo, Y5
write edge composition showcase An Inconsiderate Act By Zoe Moo, Y5 Date: 13/4/2022 (✨Onomatopoeia!) RING! The school bell rang, signalling an end to the boring dull lesson and the wonderful start of recess. “Yippee! It’s recess!” Cheered John, stretching his limbs, elated. (✨S+SP+AT!) He stuffed his homework into his schoolbag that was bursting at […]
Indep Compo, A Mishap By Sebastian Tan, Y6, Class T2L7
write edge composition showcase Indep Compo, A Mishap By Sebastian Tan, Y6, Class T2L7 Teacher: Teacher Amirah (🌟Story starter: Weather Description!) Golden rays of sunlight beat down on the surface of the Earth, roasting everything in its path – perfect weather for skateboarding. Ben got a skateboard for his birthday. Delirious with excitement, (🌟Word […]
Informal Letter By Pey Yi Wong, F1
write edge composition showcase Informal Letter By Pey Yi Wong, F1 (🌟Salutation!) Dear Jen, (🌟Intention!) I hope you are currently doing well. As for me, I am doing fine. Today, I was strolling along the pavement and saw a flyer promoting the Malaysia Comic Convention (MCC) 2021. I got permission from my parents to […]
Indep Compo, Standing Up To A Wrong Act By Lee Jia Shin, Y5, Class T2L7
write edge composition showcase Indep Compo, Standing Up To A Wrong Act By Lee Jia Shin, Y5, Class T2L7 Date: 23/4/2022 The sun was a blazing ball of fire as Ruby dragged her feet under the sweltering sun. Not even the fluffy white clouds could penetrate the glare of the sun. Sweat beaded on […]
An Argument By Jervyn Lew, Y3
write edge composition showcase An Argument By Jervyn Lew, Y3 Date: 23/4/2022 (🌟* S+ST+AT!*) “Hurry up, we’re going to be late!” my mother hollered as she waited at the front door. As quick as a lightning, (🌟*simile!*) I rushed (🌟*ways to say: ran!*) to the car because our uncle and aunt were having a […]
A Terrifying Incident By Jadon Peng de la Mar, Y3
write edge composition showcase A Terrifying Incident By Jadon Peng de la Mar, Y3 Date: 23/4/2022 It was a beautiful sunny day, and the (🌟 *weather description*) sun was high up in the sky, white fluffy clouds drifting about sleepily. It was the perfect weather and I decided to go for a quick jog […]
Saving Mother Earth By How Kim, Y4
write edge composition showcase Saving Mother Earth By How Kim, Y4 Date: 23/4/2022 (🌟Story starter: Speech!) “Goodbye, I will see you tomorrow!” Tom hollered and waved farewell to his friends. It was a sweltering afternoon and all he wanted was a cold shower. (🌟Weather Description!) Just thinking about cold water running down his back […]
The Worst Day of My Life By Giselle Chong, Y6
write edge composition showcase The Worst Day of My Life By Giselle Chong, Y6 Introduction:SS: SpeechCC: Maddy and Nick, DadS: At the hospital Rising action:-“No, no, I won’t accept it, I CAN’T accept it. NO! DO SOMETHING!!! HELP MY DAD!!!” ST+AT-Nick rushed forward and pulled Maddy aside, he had just come to the hospital from […]
Commotion Outside The Classroom By Celestyn Faye Collantes Tan, Y4, Class T2L3
write edge composition showcase Commotion Outside The Classroom By Celestyn Faye Collantes Tan, Y4, Class T2L3 Date: 12/4/2022 (🌟Story starter: Speech!) “Hence, Perfect Tense is used when we are talking about…. “Mrs Amirah explained as she gestured animatedly with her hands. We listened with our eyes glued to the whiteboard. Suddenly, our attention was […]
A Dilemma By Annabelle Chee, Class SL1
write edge composition showcase A Dilemma By Annabelle Chee, Class SL1 (🌟* Began with a setting description! *) The glass door of the shopping mall slid open, as if welcoming him to its embrace. (🌟* personification! *) A small smile tugged at his lips as the cool air from the air-conditioner caressed his face. […]