Model Compositions
A Dilemma
By Annabelle Chee, Class SL1
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* Began with a setting description! *) The glass door of the shopping mall slid open, as if welcoming him to its embrace. (* personification! …
Commotion Outside The Classroom
By Celestyn Faye Collantes Tan, Y4, Class T2L3
(Story starter: Speech!) “Hence, Perfect Tense is used when we are talking about…. “Mrs Amirah explained as she gestured animatedly with her …
The Worst Day of My Life
By Giselle Chong, Y6
(Story starter: Speech!) “Nico Di Angelo, the hospital is calling you.” the teacher drawled as he handed the phone over. “Thank you, …
Saving Mother Earth
By How Kim, Y4
(Story starter: Speech!) “Goodbye, I will see you tomorrow!” Tom hollered and waved farewell to his friends. It was a sweltering afternoon …
A Terrifying Incident
By Jadon Peng de la Mar, Y3
It was a beautiful sunny day, and the ( *weather description*) sun was high up in the sky, white fluffy clouds drifting about sleepily. It was ..
An Argument
By Jervyn Lew, Y3
(* S+ST+AT!*) “Hurry up, we’re going to be late!” my mother hollered as she waited at the front door. As quick as a lightning, (*simile!*) I …
Indep Compo, Standing Up To A Wrong Act
By Lee Jia Shin, Y5, Class T2L7
The sun was a blazing ball of fire as Ruby dragged her feet under the sweltering sun. Not even the fluffy white clouds could penetrate the glare of …
Informal Letter
By Pey Yi Wong, F1
(Intention!) I hope you are currently doing well. As for me, I am doing fine. Today, I was strolling along the pavement and saw a flyer …
Indep Compo, A Mishap
By Sebastian Tan, Y6, Class T2L7
(Story starter: Weather Description!) Golden rays of sunlight beat down on the surface of the Earth, roasting everything in its path – perfect ….
An Inconsiderate Act
By Zoe Moo, Y5
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Onomatopoeia!) RING! The school bell rang, signalling an end to the boring dull lesson and the wonderful start of recess. “Yippee! It’s …